Tag poem 2 from Poets who Blog

Tag Poem Two

Gasping for breath
like this is the end
Losing the light
Now I can’t pretend
Fireflies don’t fear
a glass jar deadend.
Beating on the glass

It’s poetry tag time at Poets Who Blog. I picked up all but the last line above from mariacristina, who picked it up from sidestepping real.

If you want to add a line, here’s what to do:

Be the first to post TAG in the comments. Then take these lines and add one, in a post on your own blog, along with these instructions. Whoever adds the nineteenth line then takes the poem to Poets Who Blog and puts the whole poem in the comment section there. Each person who plays need to also mention what site you were at when you found the poem so that other bloggers can follow the breadcrumbs back to this poem. You can play more than once but not twice in a row.


4 responses to “Tag poem 2 from Poets who Blog

  1. tag! I’m allowed to play twice!

  2. Pingback: Tag Poem 2 from Poets Who Blog « Mariacristina

  3. The group tag poem at Poets Who Blog is now posted and completed. Thanks for taking part.

  4. Hello, I would like to invite you to join; The Poetic Voice Community. It is a writer’s site where you can enter contests – add poetry and get feedback. The latest entries are listed on the blog posts. Click on link, and check us out! Then join, and post.

    Website: http://poeticvoice.ning.com/

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