Comments on: Scent story http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/08/12/scent_story/ Words about writing, singing, living and loving Thu, 19 Nov 2009 07:36:04 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: damyantig http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/08/12/scent_story/#comment-1086 damyantig Thu, 14 Aug 2008 01:27:38 +0000 http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/?p=640#comment-1086 Collaboration is indeed a great way of writing richer stuff. I love these lines here and am taking away some of the images with me. Collaboration is indeed a great way of writing richer stuff. I love these lines here and am taking away some of the images with me.

]]> By: lirone http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/08/12/scent_story/#comment-1082 lirone Wed, 13 Aug 2008 18:37:38 +0000 http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/?p=640#comment-1082 It's been fascinating taking these vivid images and turning them into a poem. It feels much richer than my normal work. I think I tend to start organising my ideas too quickly into structures rather than gathering new and varied ideas... next time I'll try to leave my sniffer open longer to allow new images and phrases to accumulate. There's so much to be learnt from collaboration! It’s been fascinating taking these vivid images and turning them into a poem. It feels much richer than my normal work.

I think I tend to start organising my ideas too quickly into structures rather than gathering new and varied ideas… next time I’ll try to leave my sniffer open longer to allow new images and phrases to accumulate.

There’s so much to be learnt from collaboration!

]]> By: suburbanlife http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/08/12/scent_story/#comment-1080 suburbanlife Wed, 13 Aug 2008 14:47:41 +0000 http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/?p=640#comment-1080 "Sometimes she sobs into his faithless shirt" - brilliant turn of phrase. "But their shared dreams have no scent, and taste of sawdust." This is a wonderful way of exploring the importance of sense of smell to male/female relationships. i love this poem's rich links. G “Sometimes she sobs into his faithless shirt” – brilliant turn of phrase.
“But their shared dreams have no scent, and taste of sawdust.”
This is a wonderful way of exploring the importance of sense of smell to male/female relationships. i love this poem’s rich links. G

]]> By: Niki http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/08/12/scent_story/#comment-1076 Niki Tue, 12 Aug 2008 22:43:26 +0000 http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/?p=640#comment-1076 I popped over from Watermark. I love what you have done with Sharon's images and the story you tell. Wonderful! I popped over from Watermark. I love what you have done with Sharon’s images and the story you tell. Wonderful!

]]> By: durable pigments http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/08/12/scent_story/#comment-1075 durable pigments Tue, 12 Aug 2008 22:38:24 +0000 http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/?p=640#comment-1075 Oh, these smells are wonderfully evocative... the vanilla, the pickup smell. Wonderful link between the vanilla and the "sales pitch." Indeed! Oh, these smells are wonderfully evocative… the vanilla, the pickup smell. Wonderful link between the vanilla and the “sales pitch.” Indeed!

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