Warm arms restfully squeezing.
Sun baking away my aches.
Cool fresh water quenching thirst
Crying with helpless laughter.
Blissful spoons of chocolate mousse.
Heart-to heart conversation.
Caring for my body’s needs.
For Cafe Writing. This short poem not only has seven lines, but each has seven syllables.
6 responses so far ↓
symbolicgodzilla // August 14, 2008 at 1:15 am |
I really like this exercise and the poem.
a~lotus // August 17, 2008 at 9:13 pm |
I love how lines 2 and 5 sound (although I’m not a big sun-worshipper!).
Cafe Writing » Blog Archive » July/August Participants // August 21, 2008 at 11:48 pm |
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MissMeliss // August 27, 2008 at 11:25 pm |
O, beautiful.
And I love the way you’ve crafted it, as well.
Thank you for participating.
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