Tag Poem Two
Gasping for breath
like this is the end
Losing the light
Now I can’t pretend
Fireflies don’t fear
a glass jar deadend.
Beating on the glass
It’s poetry tag time at Poets Who Blog. I picked up all but the last line above from mariacristina, who picked it up from sidestepping real.
If you want to add a line, here’s what to do:
Be the first to post TAG in the comments. Then take these lines and add one, in a post on your own blog, along with these instructions. Whoever adds the nineteenth line then takes the poem to Poets Who Blog and puts the whole poem in the comment section there. Each person who plays need to also mention what site you were at when you found the poem so that other bloggers can follow the breadcrumbs back to this poem. You can play more than once but not twice in a row.
3 responses so far ↓
mariacristina // March 1, 2008 at 11:39 pm |
tag! I’m allowed to play twice!
Tag Poem 2 from Poets Who Blog « Mariacristina // March 2, 2008 at 12:00 am |
[...] Lirone tagged me, and then I went back to her site for another go at this poem. I think because I know she sings and loves music, I decided to add a melodic element to the poem. Her line is in red, the two I added are in violet. [...]
Sara // March 25, 2008 at 8:32 pm |
The group tag poem at Poets Who Blog is now posted and completed. Thanks for taking part.